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Fictional Story - The Transition Pill - Chapter 1 The Introduction
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This is excellent work. Truly. The premise is believable supported by enough technical detail. Can't wait to move on to Part Two. One personal thought ... when I think of 38DD I think of back and shoulder pain and a breast reduction somewhere down the road. Also wondering about Steve's wife. Gone for six months with no contact? Will she appear later in the story? I believe you have more than accomphished trying your hand at fiction. Kudos. This deserves five stars!
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RE: Fictional Story - The Transition Pill - Chapter 1 The Introduction - by Carol G - 06-08-2021, 10:38 PM

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